Footprints in the Sand

A reformulation of the ‘Footprints in the Sand‘ poem as a limerick:

There was a man who, at low tide
Would walk with the Lord by his side
Jesus said “Now look back;
You’ll see one set of tracks.
That’s when you got a piggy-back ride.”


Great to see it distilled down but still retaining its meaning. Reminded me of this Savage Chickens cartoon about brevity.

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